I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Awesome piece of writing Justyss. I love the way you have used your remember to's firstly, secondly and thirdly. Have you seen this week's Learn Create Share?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Awesome piece of writing Justyss. I love the way you have used your remember to's firstly, secondly and thirdly. Have you seen this week's Learn Create Share?
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