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Thursday, June 10, 2021

writing week 6 term 2

 My heart is raceing i am trying to rip the tags DOUBLE RIP.

Its i hand over i ask for first run i get the ball a try to run .

Threw the other team  i step there i am almost at the.

Try line i run as fast as i can someone is running to try and get my tags. I jumped to the try line i got the try the other teams player was. To slow i got it I GOT the try  we won we shaked.

The other teams hand and said good game its time for.

Another team we start with the ball my friend runs but he gets ripped he pass it out to me i pass it out to my other friend .

He runs and gets the try 1-0  its the other teams ball i get.

a double rip i get the ball i fake pass and run to the.

Try line i go to hit the gap and run i get the try its 2-0 the other.

Team has the ball the other teams person  runs i try to rip his.

Tags he was to fast i missed the other teams tag he gets a try.

2-1 half time the ref said our team comes in  we go back on the.

Field i am on the side line our team start with the ball my team.

Mate runs he steps and runs he gets try 3-1 its the end .

Of or game or team got exicited  we won  we shake there hands.

With excitement and say good game we won the game and.

Go to have lunch with our other team they also won there game.


1 comment:

  1. hi justyss i liked how you did the double rip

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